The Bell in the Bog by Daniel Foley

The Bell in the Bog by Daniel Foley

 

The agent had called it a “generous rear aspect with potential.” From the kitchen window it looked unfinished: a strip of turf, two muddy beds, and the black patch at the back where the ground never dried.

“Bit boggy down there,” the agent said brightly. “Highland charm!”

The house is square and cream, shameless against the older cottages that crouched along the road like animals in a gale.

The builders left a stack of paving slabs by the back door and a note: “We’ll be back for these.” They never came back.

Now they are settled in, Richard tells Julia he’ll sort it himself. Raised beds. A line of decking along the edge, a place to sit with coffee and look at the hills. He buys timber from the DIY shop past the church and a new spade. The crofter over the fence watches him from a distance, dog at his heel, both of them still as stones.

“You’ll no’ get posts in that bit,” the old man says. “That’s the bog.”

“It’s a garden,” Richard says, friendly. “Just needs draining.”

The man looks past him at the house and then back at the ground. He says nothing more.

The first wheelbarrow of turf comes up easily. The second brings water. He presses a heel into the black patch; the skin gives, glistening. The smell lifts; cold, sweet, rotten. The spade goes down and down and hits something that is not earth.

Metal. A dull clang through wood and arm.

He kneels, scoops at the mud with both hands, clears a curve. The thing is not small. He works the spade under it, and the ground sucks at it like a mouth. When it loosens, it moves all at once and rolls against his shin with a weight that knocks him back on his behind.

It is a bell, knee-high when upright. Green-black with age, a clean crack running from the lip up into the shoulder. The mouth is stuffed with peat like a gag.

“Bloody hell,” he says, grinning. “Jules! Come look!”

“What is it?”

“A bell,” he says. “A church bell, maybe?”

He tips it to show the shape. He has the absurd sense that it looks at him.

“Get it away,” she says, and steps back. “You’re filthy.”

He huffs, amused, a little stung. He takes the hose and sluices the thing. Water darkens the green, runs black out of the crack. Under the algaed skin, there are marks. Not letters he recognises. Little notches and a line of something that might once have been a phrase in a language he does not know.

The crofter is closer now, at the fence, dog pressed to his leg.

“What’d I say?” the old man says, not looking at Richard, eyes on the bell. “That land’s no’ for turning.”

“It was buried,” Richard says, keeping it light. “I’m not turning, I’m… uncovering.” He smiles to show there’s no harm in him. “I’ll call the museum. They’ll love this.”

The crofter’s mouth works around a breath. “Put it back,” he says at last.

“Back?” Richard laughs, sure now that this is village theatre. “It’s history!”

“It kept it quiet,” the old man says. “That’s what it was for.”

“What what was for? Kept what quiet?”

The man’s eyes flick to the house, to Julia at the door, to the line of cloud dragging itself along the hill. “What was laid doon should bide doon.”

He walks away without waiting for a response.

#

The bell sits on the patio that evening, heavy and out of place. Richard goes at it with a stiff brush and a green pad, enjoying the work, the scrape and drag, the way the green gives under pressure to the dull, clean metal. A small cross near the shoulder; along the waist, a faint ring of letters, grown rather than carved.

He lifts it because that feels right, as though it might ring if he only holds it up to the light. It’s heavier than it looks. He thinks of art in loft apartments, raw materials turned into features. He pictures a timber frame in the corner of their new deck with the bell hung as a talking point, a wink at history. He thinks: the Sunday supplements would love this.

“Leave it,” Julia says from the door. “Please. It’s grim.”

“It’s a bell,” he says, and wants to add: and it was in our garden, and I dug it up with my hands, and that means something. He says nothing. He dries his hands on his t-shirt and goes inside to shower. The peat smell clings to his fingers, sweet and cold, like something that should be alive and is not.

#

In the night, he wakes to something he can’t name.

He lies still. The house is the house: wood ticking as it cools, a socket humming faintly, a fox in the lane, the wind at the gable. He tells himself it’s one of those. He almost sleeps again.

Then it comes once more. Not a hum. Not a tick.

A ring. Faint, like something carried from a long way off. For a moment, he thinks he’s still dreaming. The note is soft and flat, like metal struck under water.

He sits up. Julia sleeps, mouth ajar, ugly in the safe way only people you love can be. He listens hard. The sound doesn’t come again. Or if it does, it’s so low he can’t be sure.

He could wake her and ask, “Did you hear that?” He doesn’t.

In the morning, the back door sticks. He shoves with a shoulder to get it open, blames the weather, makes a mental note about sealant.

In the garden, the bell is wet though the night was dry. Two snail trails cross its flank. He wipes them with his sleeve and shudders at the feel.

When he lifts it to move it, the earth beneath shows a round patch darker than the rest, as though something had been pressing down on it.

#

At the village hall, a woman in a cardigan is sticking labels on raffle prizes for the upcoming coffee morning. He shows her the picture on his phone. The bell’s crack gleams.

“Must be the old kirk’s,” she says. “The one the bog swallowed in the rains.”

He waits.

She presses a label down flat, neat. “Nothing else out there it could belong to. You’ll be in the new house, then?”

“Yes.”

“You’ll have Morag next door,” she says. “She’ll keep you right.”

When he is leaving, she says, almost to herself, “Should’ve left it.”

He pretends not to hear.

#

At the fence, the crofter waits, or seems to. He is not looking at Richard; he looks into the bog as if expecting someone to rise. His dog lifts a paw and sets it down again, restless.

“I went to the hall,” Richard says. Some childish part of him wants to report back, to show he has done his homework. “There was a church out there. It flooded. That’s all.”

“That’s all,” the old man repeats dryly. “You’ll put the bell back, then.”

“It’s an artefact,” Richard demands. “I’ll give it to the council. Or the museum. They can display it properly.”

The old man shakes his head. “It’s no’ for display.”

“It’s mine,” Richard says. He hears how that sounds. Something inside him hardens into a glare. “It was in my garden.”

The old man’s gaze lifts to the house again, to the line where its squared-off neatness meets the black scrub. “You’ll find that’s no’ your garden,” he says. “Not really.”

He goes. The dog looks back once and then follows.

#

The next day, he drives to Inverness and buys a tin of verdigris remover because the internet said so, along with a wire wheel for his drill.

By the time he gets home, Julia has thrown out two bags of bread and a tub of strawberries.

“They’ve gone mouldy,” she says. “Everything feels damp.”

“It’s Scotland,” he offers.

She frowns. “It smells wrong.”

He kisses her cheek. She leans away.

He takes the bell and places it on a pallet in the shed, then puts on ear defenders. The wire wheel whines. The brush jumps and bites, and the bell shudders in his hands. The green peels away in flakes that fall wet, as if shedding water as they go. Letters lift. The crack looks cleaner. The long, faint line along the waist of the bell shows itself. He leans close.

The words are not words he knows. He sees a B, a D, a cross, a line that might be an E that has softened as if someone pressed it with a thumb while it was still warm. He feels suddenly as if he’s interrupted a private act.

He switches the drill off. Silence slams into him. Through the wall, the land shifts: a faint, wet suck.

He leaves the shed door open and walks away.

#

At night, it rings clear.

Not the drowned ring. A bell, here, in this room, this house, this place. The first strike lifts the hair on his forearms. The second seems to come from the kitchen. The third from the garden, and he is out of bed before the fourth, the floor cold under his feet, the door stuck again, and then yielding with a groan like a voice.

The garden is pale in the moonlight. The shed is a black square. He stands with his arms at his sides, waiting for some ordinary cause.

The bell rings. It isn’t loud. Loud would be easier. It is small and perfect, a dinner bell in a cottage, a single call answered by nothing and then another and another. It comes from the shed, but when he opens its door, it is empty. The pallet is wet. Empty. He is certain he left the bell there. He remembers lining it up with the edge of the wood. He turns to leave the shed and kicks something solid. The impact jolts through his toes.

The bell rests against his boot. He stares at it, trying to find the missing moment: the lift, the step, the placing down. There is nothing there.

He reaches for it. The metal is cold enough to feel like heat. He snatches his hand back as a child would.

The bell tilts toward him almost politely.

He carries it into the garden and sets it by the black patch. He stands over it. “Ring,” he says, and waits.

The wind goes through the cypress and makes a noise like whispering. The bell offers nothing.

When he comes inside, Julia is sitting on the edge of the bed. The bedside lamp is on. Her face is white and her eyes are black. For a moment, he thinks she is a different person, someone who is here to tell him something he cannot bear. Then she says, low, “What is going on?”

“It’s the house,” he says, surprised by the steadiness of his voice. “It’s just a new house. They settle. It’s damp. We’ll get a dehumidifier.”

“I heard something,” she says. “Like a… It felt like it was in my chest.”

“A bell.”

She flinches. She stays a long time with her hands in her lap, thumbs pressed together so hard the tips blanch.

“I’m going to Mum’s for a few days,” she says at last.

It is not a request. He nods. He wants to say: I’ll come too. He wants to say: Don’t. Instead, he says nothing.

In the morning, she leaves. Her hug is dutiful and off-target. When her car has gone, he stands in the shower until the water runs warm to cold and back again, and he cannot say what any temperature is.

#

He builds the frame that day as a way of proving that time is real. He sinks posts where the ground lets him. At the bog edge, he cannot find purchase. The auger goes down to the handle and comes up with a soft sucking sound. He tells himself the right mix will make the ground behave. He sets a beam between two posts and clamps it so it will not fall. He cannot make a square. He cannot make anything true in this place.

He screws a bracket to the fence, then drills two neat holes in the bell’s crown with a bit meant for steel. The drill whines, bites, and the sound goes into the house through the brick and into the cupboards and his own teeth. The crack shakes. He runs a bolt through and hangs the bell from the bracket because anything is better than having it crouch at his feet, demanding notice.

He stands back and forces himself to admire it. From the kitchen window, he can tell himself it is handsome. It makes the fence look deliberate instead of a line marking where the builder gave up.

He waits for the crofter. He wants him to see. He wants him to approve, or be angry enough to make Richard feel real. The fence stays empty. The dog does not appear. In the afternoon, a thin rain falls sideways under the sun.

That night, the bell rings properly, like a bell should.

The sound is a knife’s clean edge. It hangs in the air and seems to lean on the house. The first strike is at 9pm. The second is at 9.02pm. The third does not wait two minutes. It comes at once, impatiently.

Richard stands in the back doorway and cannot make himself step out. He feels the sound move through him and knows that if he puts his foot on the patio, the note will go through the bones in a way that will change them.

He goes upstairs and lies on his back with his hands flat on the duvet. The bell rings each minute now. He thinks of clocks. He thinks of heart monitors. He tries to time it with his breath and fails. When it stops, he does not know when it stopped, and that is worse. The silence presses against him, close as skin.

He dreams of the ground rising into shapes trying at people. Shoulders and arms swelling from peat, faces half-formed and sinking again. They move as if in procession, collapsing and reforming, a line without end.

#

In the morning, the hallway floor is damp. Not wet, just damp, as if the house had a tongue. He lays a towel, and the towel goes dark and heavy. He calls a man about the damp. The man says, “I can do Tuesday.” In his voice is the sound of someone already knowing what he will find, and enjoying being right.

At the shop, Morag from next door is buying milk. Her hair is set in a cloud of spray, and her glasses have beads on a string. She smiles with her teeth pressed to her lip as if that will make the smile less dangerous.

“I hear you’ve found our bell,” she says, as if the two of them have been in on something all along.

“Your bell?” he says, lightly. “From your church?”

“From the place that was there first,” she says.

He laughs thinly. “Everyone’s poetic here.”

Morag leans close so the girl at the counter cannot hear. “What was laid doon,” she says, breath warm in his ear, “should bide doon.” She nods. “We say that because we learned it.”

“How?” he says. “Where did you learn it?”

She looks, for a moment, like a young woman inside her old face, someone who watched something happen and never told. “We listened,” she says. “It told us.”

“Who?”

She looks past him to the door and heads towards it. “Not who.”

#

He cannot stop himself polishing the bell that afternoon. It’s like worrying a loose tooth, rereading a hurtful message again and again. The letters along the waist have resolved into themselves. He still cannot read them though. It does not feel like English or Latin. The letters resolve into shapes that feel wrong in his mouth, as if they were never made for people to speak.

He takes a picture. The letters vanish in the image, the metal showing only blank. He puts a hand out and touches the bell as if to test himself for fever. It is colder than metal should be out in the sun. He puts his ear to the lip. He feels foolish and then not foolish at all as the cold climbs into the cartilage and the bone. From within the bell, he hears a sound that is not ringing. He hears a long breath.

He jerks back, banging his head against the bracket hard enough to see stars. He swears out loud and laughs, high and childish, to cancel the other noise. He goes inside, shuts the door, and locks it.

The key scrapes in the new barrel like a blade on bone.

#

On Tuesday, the damp man does not come. His van idles outside for a minute, exhaust spilling white into the air. Then it pulls away without anyone getting out.

Richard watches the van’s lights fade.

He puts on his boots and goes out. The bog edge gleams like an open mouth.

He feels the sound in his teeth before it rings, and the moment it strikes the pleasure is so intense he almost says thank you. It feels like the note has drawn a line for him, and he walks it, heel to toe, like a young boy on a wall.

The black ground moves under its skin. Not water. Water is bright. This is something that has decided for a very long time to be still, and could change its mind. His boot goes in an inch and then two and then not at all.

A second ring comes. It is not from the fence. It is farther, and beyond farther, and then very near. He cannot place it in space. He does not try.

He steps out onto the black.

It takes him, but not as a swallow. It accepts. The first impression is of comfort, the way a pillow remembers you and shapes itself around your ear. He breathes through his mouth and smells nothing, which is worse than rot. He takes another step and the ground holds him as if he weighs less than before. He breathes out once, almost a laugh, and keeps walking.

From the side there is a movement. He turns his head and, for a second, sees the outline of a wall under the surface, a curve of stone. He blinks and it’s gone. His boot knocks something solid, but when he looks down, the bog shows only his own warped reflection.

The bell rings.

The sound is inside his head. It is inside his chest. It is under his tongue as a taste of metal and something sweet. It feels like a memory that isn’t his, something pressed into him from before there were names for things. He takes another step because he cannot not.

There are shapes in the bog, low humps like shoulders just beneath the skin. There are holes the size of hands. He sees, for a second, the arch of a door made of nothing but a darker dark, then that is not there either. He thinks of the word sea on a map, too small for what it names.

A voice speaks, and he is so relieved he could cry. “Richard,” the voice says. It speaks in a voice that feels borrowed from his own blood. “Richard,” the voice says again, and he says “Yes,” without meaning to.

He knows it is not Julia. He knows it is not anyone. It is older than that. Older than the kirk, older than the people who cut peat here. Older than people. He feels himself nodding as though answering a master who has always been there, waiting.

He thinks of the crofter and his dog, weathered and ordinary. He thinks of the bell on the fence. He thinks of the word “bide” and sees it as a flat thing on paper, and then that slips as if the letters are slick.

He takes one more step because all the other steps made sense and this one must too. The ground lifts him and then lets him go as a mother might let a child’s hand when they are old enough to cross a road. He does not fall. Falling is a thing that ends. He goes down and down at the same speed as thinking, and there is no end to it.

When the bell rings next, it is not a sound. It is a lightless flash behind his eyes. He thinks, with a little interest, that he will not hear another. He is wrong. They go on, like a season turning, even after he stops counting, even after he stops needing to be a person who counts.

#

Julia comes back on the Thursday.

The door sticks, so she leans in with her shoulder, and the swollen frame gives, wood sighing as though it resents the push.

The hall smells wrong. Lilies, though she hasn’t brought any. The sort of smell that belongs to funerals, not kitchens.

“Richard?” she calls.

No answer.

Rooms sit untouched. A film coats the glass, as if the house has been breathing.

The back door is ajar. She steps out.

The bell hangs on the fence, tilted, green-black, crack down the side. The ground around it gleams though the week has been dry.

“You’re here,” she says when he comes out from the shed. Boots dark with mud, shirt clinging damp. His face is calm in a way she doesn’t recognise. His eyes fix on something just behind her.

“This smell,” she says. “You’ve not got it sorted at all.”

“It isn’t the house,” he says. His voice is low, almost fond. “It’s the land. It’s working again.”

“What on earth are you on about?”

He doesn’t answer. He only looks at her, gaze resting as though measuring where she fits.

“This has to go,” she says, nodding at the bell. “I mean it. Today.”

“It stays.”

“Richard–”

“It stays.” The words sound borrowed, pressed into his mouth.

She grips the bracket and yanks. Metal rasps. Her hair swings forward, face set in effort. “Help me, for God’s sake.”

The bell gives a single note, small and exact. Richard feels it in his chest, his teeth, the hinge of his jaw. Not sound, but command.

He moves without thought. The spade leans against the fence. His hand closes on it.

“Richard?” she says, half-turning.

He swings.

The sound is dull, ordinary. She folds at once, knees giving, head striking the slab before sliding into the mud. He stands over her, breathing hard.

The bell tilts in its bracket, mouth dark, and gives a soft tick, a pulse under his skin.

He kneels. “Jules,” he says.

He slides his hands under her shoulders to lift, but the ground is already loosening, accepting her weight. Her legs sink first, fabric darkening.

“No,” he says, but his hands don’t pull. They guide.

Her eyes flicker open once. She looks at him, not pleading, not afraid. Accusing. Her lips move but make no sound.

The suction takes her hips, her chest. One arm lingers a moment, palm up like an offering. Then it slides under, fingers last. The bog closes neat as a purse string.

Silence.

Richard sits back on his heels. His palms are black to the wrist. He lifts them, stares as though they aren’t his. The bell’s mouth faces him. Inside, he hears breathing.

“All right,” he whispers. “All right.”

The bell doesn’t answer.

It doesn’t need to.

Editor’s Note

A splendid tale from an up and coming writer. We spoke to Daniel about where this idea came from, and the importance of locality in our interview with him.

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